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I am grapes

i am grapes and everyone gives me pain
i am grapes and i am tossed around like nobody.
i hurt and be be bruised.
Grapes are bruised and rotten
i bruised by my hurting heart

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i am grapes
Written April 26th, 2006

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  • Demonic Mistress
    April 26, 2006
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    I like this poem. It is very emotive. I can clearly see your pain. The way you used the imagery was good. Thanks for entering
    Demonic Mistress xxx


  • wings of an angel
    April 26, 2006
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    Very nice write, well done and beautifully penned