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life

When life begins.
You hear your first sounds.
Its exciting,
you don't know whats
all around.
You see your mom,
and you see your dad.
There smiling faces
make you glad.
Then you grow up
and everything gets ruff,
but that's life
and you know it is.
Stick you chin up and take it.
Life's just the  meaning of you
and me.
Life's just a lesson we have  
to learn.
It comes to all in different terms...

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Written April 26th, 2006

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  • Frodofan silver member
    February 8, 2007

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    I would add onto this. It has an interesting beat and could make a song. I think "ruff" should be "rough."