Dancing playfully like children,
Swirling and laughing endlessly.
Meadows freely dancing and embracing.
A celebration of trust.
Sweet captivating moments,
Harmonious unisons of song.
A nonchalant way into one's purity.
Seeping cool winds blow.
Til fragranced hello's wave,
Motions of friendship giggle.
A notion of life so full of vibrance.
Merciless joys laugh into tears.
Long to wait a friendship like ours,
A stranger in pale moon in sight.
A grace that walked into the room.
That simple smile from you.
Author notes
Just poetic muses flowing in the motion of friendship.
Written April 25th, 2006
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Simply Beautiful
OH WOW... THIS WAS AMAZING!! Astonishing!! Oh my goodness!! I haven't read something this good in a WHILE....
Everything just paints this wonderous picture in my mind. I read it three times in a row. It was simply beautiful. Just beautiful.
man, your choice of words were amazing.
Your vocabulary is wonderful. I hate seeing the same "good, bad, happy, sad" all the time. It's wonderful... Simply beautiful... I could go on and on and on about how good it is.
Wow... Amazing... Very good. Very very good.
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My dear stormigrl, let me count the ways. Long time no see, no chat, no talk. Vey busy though. Anyway, this is a really good poem. I love the rich elegance of the words you use. It helps captivate the subject, topic and all. Well, we will talk again I hope. good one
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Thanks so much Melissa for the wonderful comment, Ah I thought it was time for a nice write LOL.
Love Marianne 
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Lovely write Marianne. Hugs Melissa
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