The glimmer from the sunset illuminates
the shadows of your spirit
igniting my passion that cries out your name
My heart skips a beat wildly as I gaze in the
dense mist of your love
I reach out to caress you,
my mouth begins to water
my body begins to sweat
Now as I sit desperately concealing my empty heart
I realize that I could never really possess you
For you have always been but a vision in my dreams
Dreams that I have pursued for far too long
But, as the hands of time slowly appear
your journey back to my heart has gasped with excitement
So patience be my only companion, until your
soul reaches my heart
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Written April 25th, 2006
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This is a great piece of love text because it is very heart felt and meaningful without being sappy or effusive. It is very difficult to write love pieces because they are either so personal that no one gets it but the author. Or so ridiculous in their being 'overwhelmed' with love, that the work becomes unbelievable. This ones goes the extra mile and finds a soft confidence in the possibility for the future and the resignation of what cannot be now. The piece begins with passion and then evolves into lost hope but revives itself in the end with the journey back. Excellent work my friend without underdoing or overdoing. RC
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Wow!!!! OMG..........ummmmmmmmmm.........Wow!!!! This is amazing!!!! Beautiful....Sweet.......Romantic.......And all those other loving words!!!!
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