beauty is
when you find someone
that you can share your deepest, darkest secret with
and he smiles ever-so-slightly
because he feels the
exact
same
way.
beauty is
when you find someone
that in the morning when you wake up looking like a zombie;
all he can do is look into your eyes and see how
beatiful
you
are.
beauty is
to be put ever-so-simply
in one cillable, and four little letters:
el
oh
vee
ee.
there is nothing more beautiful than love.
Author notes
that is purely what i see to be beautiful, a true, unbreakable connection with someone that will never fade away ♥
good luck gudging 
Written April 25th, 2006
A contest entry
- Beauty. by Chu.
300 points, ended April 30, 2006, 25 entries
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aww thank you! yeah i've never entered a contest liek this befre so i decided to try. it was one where i think you were supposed to write a few scentances of a paragraph, but i decided to do it a little different. im so happy you liked it and im looking forward to your next peice!!!
~your daughter, andreaa ♥ -
I liked this!! So different..and I liked how you repeated beauty is.. A lot of emotion and imagery is in this. Awesome work and good luck!
~Mommy
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