Sometimes I wonder does anyone care about the things that I hold inside. The things I won't share with anyone because of a fear I have. I wonder if it ever crosses their minds how much goes on in my life that I've kept inside of me not telling them, because I'm afraid of what people would say, think or ask. I wonder if they even care that some of these things that I hold with in are the same things that make me who and what I am. I wonder if they even know that those things that I've kept to myself tell a story, good or bad. I wonder if any one even knows I exist or if anyone really understands!
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I'm sry for not writing lately its that i havent felt much but this is sumthing i really have thought about... so tell me what u think about this writing
Written April 25th, 2006
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this was exactly how i was feeling today..the thought keeps goin through my head does anyone care at all?..i loved ur expression
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Oh my. The things you have exressed in this write happenes to everyone. You have done an amazing job at expressing the feelings that people go trough and what you are feeling. This is an amazing piece of writing. You just got to keep your head up, stay strong and don't let what anyone says to you get to you. I also seen a few things wrong with this. Like something I see were two words and actually meant to be one, or some punctuation errors but nothing big. Great job. Amazing girl, simply amazing. It's always great to read your writes.
<3
JiGgLeZ -
sweetie!! Oh goodness...this is how i feel everyday of my life. You've really done a great job with this piece of work, and im glad to see something new written from you. but thats beside the point! You've done a great job with this poem! YOu have portrayed your feelings so well, and this makes me want to cry, i feel like im writing it! Amazing job sweetie, and always remember that i Love you and i really do care for you. ♥
Love always,
Stephani -
Hey
To be honest there are some things in everybodys lives they will always hold inside, but if you can find someone who takes a look in your eyes for more than five minutes without looking away while your talking or makes your heart stop just because they are listening thats the one you will talk to. The things you hold inside are things that make you cry at night its the things that wish you were dead instead of alive, but once you talk about things they do get easier. Im not saying that it will take away your hurt or anything but it will mean when you are low you have someone their with you.I have alot of things I never used to want to talk about but I found a someone (my best friend) who took the time to get to know me and searched behind the mask I put on everyday. I have told her everything about my life especially the bad stuff. Before I spoke I was scared of reactions and things like that too but everything I imagined was the total opposite to what actually happened.
I really hope you find that special somebody and if even if you dont I can be hear as a listening ear if you want to talk Im happy to listen. Everyone understand someones heartache, we all feel it at some point or another
Take Care BIg Hug
Gemma x x x -
i understand! im here for you...and i use to hold so much inside but now im afraid too hold back anything so i just write it insteead! ok im here 4 you
ceci -
great show of expression well written these are some raw and real emotions wrote here and you're not alone sweetie
this is what I've heard in the pass "this too shall pass" I have to remind myself of these words alot and it works for me..
smiles to you and hugs too 
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i LOVE this poem.. ur not the only that wonders about these stuff? i do also. Good job!
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Awesome
Nice poem strawberrie! Yes I think we all have things that we keep to ourselves and don't want to share with anyone else. I know that you are a beautiful person inside and out strawberrie. Do not let anyone judge you or make you feel less than a human being. You are a gift of God. Do not forget that!
Ronnie aka The Brooklyn Six Project™ -
beautiful- and sad.
I have missed you. I was beginning to be worried.
The words are true. We have the same in common, dear Daughter, but for different reasons.
I would love it if I had you as my real daughter. It would be a challenge, to let you know I cared, to have trust...and love you and never judge you. That allows communication to open up. I don't have anyone like that- never have.
But yes...I do care. I wish I knew you inside-out and that you would LOVE that feeling, instead of holding it deep inside.
Because obviously, what you are is precious, and it would be a shame if no one could see beyond that pretty face.
Beautiful words...so emotional.
All my love;
Dad.
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I love this it is so ture. You always seem to speak the excact truth. Keep up the good work. LOVE IT.
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I love this. There's times that I feel like this but you cannot keep worrying about what people say or think about you. If ya need me just holla at me. I love this write.
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I think all of us keep a part of us closed off from the rest of the world because it makes us who we are...
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I really love this.If you ever need a friend to talk to I'm here.Great right.
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