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Beautiful dreamers

                       BEAUTIFUL DREAMERS


  Have You Ever Heard a Voice that Melts Your Heart,
and Reminds You of a Gentle Sunset?
  Too Fall Fast Asleep in the Arms of a True Love,
Whose Whispers Make Angel's Sigh, and Who Makes Your
Troubled Soul Forget.
  Have You Felt a Pulse So Vibrant that You Shelter in
Its Rhythm, as if Forecasting a Nestled Dove too Coo?
  Too Tremble at Its Harmony as if the Harps in Heaven
Serenade the Cherubim too All Slumber at Once as If On
Cue.
  Have You Ever Caught the Scent of Jasmine, Followed
by a Vision of Beauty that Playfully Eludes?
  One that Takes Your Breath Away and Leaves You
Wanting Nothing More than too Inhale the Very Essence
of the Life that She Exudes.
  Have You Ever Desired too Spend Time with Someone So
Desperately, that All Time Stands Still, When Together
Begging for Every Seconds Delay?
  That When the Clock Finally Begins too Tick, All
Your Dreams Race Before Your Eyes like Seedlings
Blooming at Her Feet, Worshiping Her Like I Do in an
Affectionate Display.
  Have You Ever Loved So Little than When True Love
Hits Home It Awakens You too Paradise, Gazing upon Her
as She Rests So Peaceful?
  Watching Her Dream, Smiling and Praying that Her
Dreams Come True, Sensing the Dreams are of Each
Other, Both So Beautiful.
  Have You Ever Woken at the Very Same Moment and
Breath, that a Sigh of Wonder Leaves You Both in a
Loving Trance?
  Knowing Your Dreams are Reality, and that It Was God
that Allowed Such Beauty, Bestowing You Both the
Chance.

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Written April 25th, 2006

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  • Aeonna
    January 26, 2007
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    wow

    beautiful imagery, tender words of love dream

    bravo, bravo...

    velvet rose


  • michellemybelle gold member
    January 25, 2007

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    WOW!
    THis is beautiful, actually brought tears. What tender words of deep love you write here.

    I am amazed


  • Cherrylv
    April 25, 2006
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    Wonderfully romantic

    This is a wonderfully romantic poem. I have not felt everything you list in reality but they are often in my dreams.
    You have really emphasised your love and passion in the poem by the extra use of capital letter. I have never seen this doen before.