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Why!!!

Why do i deal with it?
Why do i care?
Why are they running your life?
Why do you hate me?
Why are we always hurting?
Why do they have to get mad at you cause you are my friend?
I don't understand and i have all these question that will never be end.

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this is a poem about other people and me and how they feel about there life.
Written April 25th, 2006

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  • April 29, 2006
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    thanx. i like yr poem, its a little short lol but thats ok, not all poems have to be long. good write.


  • Cupcrazy gold member
    April 26, 2006
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    Nice write, strong emotions and confusion in this one. Good work! Bunny