Now I lay me down to sleep
I hope my dreams come true
I pray the lord my soul to keep
To keep it safe for you
If I die before I wake
I know that you'll be fine
I pray the lord my soul to take
But leave my love to shine
If by chance I see the day
I'll thank the lord above
For every day that I'm alive
Is one more day of love
Author notes
Something different for all
Written April 25th, 2006
A contest entry
- Poems and Songs by gentle breeze.
495 points, ended June 4, 2007, 12 entries
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Okay, I know a bit about The Lord's Prayer from Literature and other things. I think you've done an interesting job in your turn of it. Thanks for entering.
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can you put the words to the Lord's prayer in your author box please? Will be much appreciated. Thanks
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Very good poem, I love it. I'm sure every person has heard the Prayer it was inspired by, but I'll be using this one from now on
Keep up the great writes!
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This was so cute. Almost brought a tear to my eye. Keep up the good work!!
Soon to be queen, but for now still the...
Nubian Princess -
this is so sweet. it is something different. very touching.
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A beatiful prayer
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Awwwwww!!!
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