confusion swirls about my head
and i wonder why my heart feels like lead
it weighs me down as i try to dance in the rain
it's all i can do to try to keep sane
i get whiplash from thoughts flying to and fro
joining my other troubles already in tow
weight keeps piling on my crooked shoulders
and the heat from the sun smolders
much like the burn of a woman scorned
standing helpless and forever forlorn
so i raise my hear and try
so that the devil, time, can't pass me by
nothing ain't worth my lost time
ain't going to wait till the stars align
so I'll kick up my heels and see how it feels
to take a chance and dance
in the pouring rain while ignoring pain
and my mind can be all mine
till the sun shines
Author notes
umm i don't really like this one....i only like the devil time line..but other than that i think the rhymes kinda too rhyme-y...like cat-hat-bat...so why did i put this up? i like the concept......
Written April 24th, 2006
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MUY SEXI if u ask me
it's great lauren..it's really funny..cuz if i read 100 poems and one of them was urs...i would know exactly which one it would be...i don't mean that negatively...i mean..you add a certain personality to ur poems....hmm i pretty much am trying to say that...I can feel ur Aura thru your poems...be Happy..it's a good thing..
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