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Crap

Like badly named poop
I feel tossed away again
the love collapsing

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what do u think???????
Written April 24th, 2006

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  • sanmdr
    April 24, 2006
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    good write .. good flow of words and emotions..


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    April 24, 2006
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    umm, I think you were very bummed out when you wrote this, that's what I think. I'm not really sure what to say about this poem other than I'm sorry.