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The Welcome (cinquain)

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Welcome,
to my world of
sunshine and light, a kiss
to hold you so safely at night...
sleep tight.



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Written April 24th, 2006

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  • cutiepie gold member
    April 26, 2006
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    Thanks Abigail glad you enjoyed it

  • heart on sleeve
    April 25, 2006
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    this is better, than some i have been reading short simple and yet so powerful a sentiment, tender words in a short way
    beautiful
    abigail


  • cutiepie gold member
    April 25, 2006
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    Thank you for your kindness the picture I cannot take credit for but yes I agree it is very beautiful

  • cutiepie gold member
    April 25, 2006
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    I have always had this "Tinkerbell" illusion of often feeling more at ease with children than with adults...as I get older I find that things that used to frustrate me when my children were growing up, now seem perfectly logical...perhaps I now see the world through my second childhood rather than mature adulthood Either way, the children of the world ease my soul and show me a future whereby there can be peace and harmony. Thank you my friend for your kindness as always it is appreciated

  • Ir.muse
    April 25, 2006
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    A beautiful piece with a very nice picture.
    Wish you luck in the contest.

    Shahrzad


  • cutiepie gold member
    April 25, 2006
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    Thank you I am delighted that you enjoyed it


  • cutiepie gold member
    April 25, 2006
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    Thank you for finding such amazing pictures...

  • cutiepie gold member
    April 25, 2006
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    Thank you John, I am delighted that you enjoyed this. Your wife must be a very beautiful woman . Many thanks for your kindness


  • wattle silver member
    April 25, 2006
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    Ms Cutie, A light passes over your face when children enter. Thank you.


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    April 25, 2006
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    What a beautiful write. This could almost be a mother's prayer goodnight.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 24, 2006
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    This is beautiful and sincere. Thanks so much for this lovely entry... x


  • macandrew
    April 24, 2006
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    When reading this I was once again tossed into the world of my wifes work, that of the deaf-blind.

    So lucky we are.

    Well written
    John

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