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Come Under My Wing

I try to be enough for everyone
I want no one to feel like I do
I promise you my friend it ain't fun
I will carry your burden for you

I fail sometimes, I do hate myself for that
Excuse me please, I want to mean something
I don't mean to push you, I just want to help
Come under my broad, wide, defending  wing

It feels so meaningless sitting know nothing
Am I able to help anyone in this rude world
People that I care about just don't want my wing
Feels worthless to postpone my life anymore
I don't do any benefit, so why do I keep fighting

The one I hold deep in my heart, says I do good
But they never tell me whats wrong in their minds
Is it because I'm so depressed  myself, I wonder
All I want is to protect, what is it that blinds
I honestly want to help you all, in any kinds

I'm sick to feel this emptiness inside of my shell
Wheres the love everyone talk about, I cant find it
Maybe I am that worthless that I think, no one to tell
Nobody want my help I offer, I don't place here, don't fit
All these people out in this cruel world that feels sh-it

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Written April 24th, 2006

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  • Urged
    April 24, 2006
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    Really good, alot of hopelessness in this poem. I recognize the feeling. Well done