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Natural Discontent

Me,
how these photons do infect
You - I,
and eachother
together

Us within ourselves
are together
apart
from our lives
from which these photons do infect.

And matters do radiate
outward
from themselves
and inward to infect
towards our being

Atomized nominations
bringing forth our existance
through colorful resonations
Our harmonic tendancies.

And with I
As with you - in me
our self would believe
all that it would see...

Oh how the photons do infect,
cause our senses to detect,
And our souls to reflect.
Some harmonic discontent.

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Written April 24th, 2006

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