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Football

Blue 42, Blue 42, hut, hut hike!
Quarterback ready to pass,
wow, he caught it1
Run, run, come on run!
5 yards, 4, 3, 2, 1,
Touchdown!

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I wrote this for my little brother. He asked me to write this for him. so please tell me if you like it. He is 8 years old and totally into football so I hpe you enjoy!
Written April 24th, 2006

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  • JLZdancer
    April 25, 2006
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    i like that. it is cute. LOVE IT.


  • arezes mom
    April 24, 2006
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    cute

    hey sis i think its good maybe when he get older he will be on here!!!
    its so cute

  • drooling4cena
    April 24, 2006
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    good

    not mine... but he can when he wants to. i wrote this for him cause he had a good day and was bein preety cool. but i an glad you like it.


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 24, 2006
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    Oh how sweet! So good, I really liked it. Little brothers Rock! Great job.