Alex(alexandria):
Well my time has come to an end and all i can do is think about you my friend
These are my last breaths i take I'm about to be gone and yet i still shake
You ask why i shake i cant explain
This is not that plain
There's so many things id like to say
But i have so little time to stay
These are my last moments id like to be with you
But sadly I'm all alone and i feel blue
What i have to tell is so true
But i don't have time to tell you
With the last strength i have i write this to you.
"My friend that's what we are
i don't see you as just a friend
but as way more.We have known
each other for so long that we are
half and half and together we
are one. Ive seen you as more than
just a friend. I've fallen in love
with you since i met you. I've liked
your smile, your eyes when you
look at me you make me melt, and cant
stand tha fact that im living without
you. I love you more than just a friend
but as someone i could have been with
but i have waited for much to long,
shocking i know no one would have
thought I'd end like this. Everyone
thoguht i'd be a great soilder, fighter,
warrior without a down fall. Sadly I'm
down and out. I really do love you i
would have done anything for you.
(to be continued....)
Author notes
well this is a poem but also a story you will enjoy i hope, this is the first part i will continue to write the ending an ill keep u updated but until then laterz
(it starts out as a poem and ends up as a story)
Written April 23rd, 2006
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Everyone thought i'd be a great soilder, fighter, warrior without a down fall. <--- I really like the way you worded that. I really like this piece, you did a fantastic job! Keep up the good work. Thanks for the comment too! : )
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Thanks for the comment and applause and yea u did get the meaning to it oh but its not finished yet
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awww how sweet! It reminds of..My Girl,the movie.Thats if I'm thinking the write description of this.But anyways,very good!


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