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Last Moments

Alex(alexandria):
Well my time has come to an end and all i can do is think about you my friend
These are my last breaths i take I'm about to be gone and yet i still shake
You ask why i shake i cant explain
This is not that plain
There's so many things id like to say
But i have so little time to stay
These are my last moments id like to be with you
But sadly I'm all alone and i feel blue
What i have to tell is so true
But i don't have time to tell you
With the last strength i have i write this to you.
         
              "My friend that's what we are
               i don't see you as just a friend
               but as way more.We have known
               each other for so long that we are
               half and half and together we
               are one. Ive seen you as more than
               just a friend. I've fallen in love
               with you since i met you. I've liked
               your smile, your eyes when you
               look at me you make me melt, and cant
               stand tha fact that im living without
               you. I love you more than just a friend
               but as someone i could have been with
               but i have waited for much to long,
               shocking i know no one would have
               thought I'd end like this. Everyone
               thoguht i'd be a great soilder, fighter,
               warrior without a down fall. Sadly I'm
               down and out. I really do love you i
               would have done anything for you.
(to be continued....)

Author notes

well this is a poem but also a story you will enjoy i hope, this is the first part i will continue to write the ending an ill keep u updated but until then laterz
(it starts out as a poem and ends up as a story)
Written April 23rd, 2006

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  • Taryn
    July 12, 2006
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    Everyone thought i'd be a great soilder, fighter, warrior without a down fall. <--- I really like the way you worded that. I really like this piece, you did a fantastic job! Keep up the good work. Thanks for the comment too! : )

  • mysteryfriend
    April 23, 2006
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    Thanks for the comment and applause and yea u did get the meaning to it oh but its not finished yet


  • Cry-n-WishTheEnd
    April 23, 2006
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    awww how sweet! It reminds of..My Girl,the movie.Thats if I'm thinking the write description of this.But anyways,very good!