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in your eyes

Hush now don't you cry
Everything will be alright
The bright stars in the sky
Slowly watch me die
I'll be fine
Set me free
It's only a bad dream
In your eyes
Watch me fly

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Written April 23rd, 2006

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  • cruel kindness
    July 22, 2006
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    wow! great poem... short and expressive... good job!