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chaos

wonder what power is all about???
it distresses me,
this thing, power.
from the depths from which it arose,
to the highest point it could reach,
it found me.
it devoured me.
hence now i have become,
the beacon of chaos.

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Written April 23rd, 2006

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  • FlyingXDaggers
    July 28, 2006
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    makes me think

    yes yes dear cus, what is power?? that is a very good question that this inquisitive poem has triggered in my mind... nicely written and good luck with the new house

  • Headstrong2TakeUOn
    May 5, 2006
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    OK

    ok yea this is alright and all. I guess thats because i yearn for some type of power i cant posess...