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Grown Children (or) Why Daddy Seems Distracted

10000 days
playing nonstop
kids run rampant
chess tournament

in my lap
sketchbook open
psychedelic sunshine
to go on my fridge

soon all three boys
are drawing pictures
I count myself lucky
fathering these geniuses

10000 days
greatest album ever
make my soul jump up
and dance happy

home is a space
kept in the mind
fills you with peace
even all alone

children know bullshit
like a fart in a car
I stick to the truth
painful and humbling

searching for secrets
is time consuming
disappointing and
feels like syrup between fingers

I painted the Om symbol
on the yellow fabric
not just because I like it
I had nothing else to do

there is a distant fear
noodling my mind
what will I do
when my boys don't need me?

can't live for others-
you'll be lonely when they're gone
as much as I love these geniuses,
I'll be alone when they're gone.

Author notes

raise our children free thinking and independent
Written April 23rd, 2006

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  • solarjinx
    April 25, 2006
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    I'm still tending the wound left by getting smacked by Josie on the chess board. Ouch. You're doing a fine job raising those lil gangstas, I mean geniuses. And when they've grown and gone away you'll still be able to see them just fine because they are gonna shine real bright.


  • ceansky
    April 24, 2006
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    awesome

    Very nice. Since I know you I could see alot of this in my head...but not to worry...you are never alone...you are among kindred spirits in many different places....keep up the wonderful writing.