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Raven

The Proud Ink Raven
Chants Raucous Rants in the Rain
Opinionated

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Written February 28th, 2003

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  • belac
    May 8, 2005
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    this was a neat cleaver 5-7-5 haiku, good imagery and thats a major part of a haiku. I like to write some here and there, I think sometime I'll put some together for ap.

    cheers.

  • Theasp
    May 5, 2005
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    Well done

    Poe on speed what a self deprecating commentary on one's writing, is that not what I am reading ???nespas? toocute.


  • TaraKM silver member
    April 30, 2005
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    Well I would ordinarily tell someone with a poem of such few lines to add another stanza, but really the way you ended this on one crisp noted word, it's kind'a nice just the way it is. Very descriptive language here, nice!

    Tara


  • IronIcecream
    April 30, 2005
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    the Proud Ink Raven - the true essence when it's filtered by sentiments -
    opionated - cause there can't be truth otherway
    I think your haiku it's a definition of diversity in artistic demeanors. Great job.


  • natari gold member
    April 28, 2005
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    good

    Well done this was a great piece.

  • BrokenDownPalace
    March 3, 2003
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    I enjoyed this piece very much.
    The imagery was suttle but there
    This piece was short yet sweet
    Great write
    Keep up the great work

    Lots of Love~~
    ~~~Mojdeh~~~


  • Lurie
    March 1, 2003
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    UNIQUE

    Is your pen possessed again!? LOL
    I like this...it's very different, unique for a haiku!
    ~Laura

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