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Two for Romance on this Saturday Night

 

 

 

two romantic pieces,

with small musical accompaniments, the melodies which mirror the words...





           I Feel the Heat of Your Eyes
   ( hear the melody... )

 

I feel the heat of your eyes
within my heart tonight,
within my heart tonight...


there's no escaping this desire...


I can’t escape you now,
you’re in my mind tonight...

 

now, or later,

my submission will be           

 

completed...

 

 

us, two,

 

completed...

 


 

 





                  Enchanted Love
   ( hear the melody...)

 

(enchanted lovers...)

 

You’re close by-
I sense you are near...

Your kiss is like heaven,
I must confess
it's raining love,

it's raining love.

 

(...raining...)

 

 

right now,
right now...

 

 

I can’t be
expected to hide-

when you’re here within me,
I melt in your
enchanted love;

enchanted love.

 



 

 

 

 

 

 

Author notes

I just worked on this a bit yesterday, might as well see how it fares against all the other styles...

Windows note- you can right-click on the 'hear the melody' link, then choose 'new window' to have two windows, so you can listen and read at the same time...

you many have to begin the melody again, as some programs jump a few seconds into it, skipping the first verse or two...

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  • Night Hope gold member
    April 23, 2006
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    Three things, Wayne...First, I gotta win the lottery... & just for your info, Oklahoma City does have DSL & cable...I just can't get it...It would interfere with their computer, that they use for their business, which is why I'm on dial~up...& I have Windows98, thank you very much... Heyyy, maybe if my book sells well, I can get a new one someday...sighhh...& yeahhh, I'll be a Prairie Princess until they plant me... Wanda


  • wbiro gold member
    April 23, 2006
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    Thanks Wanda. Now two things: First, you MUST get a modern computer! That 1995 model you are using should catch a fine price to collectors of antiques on EBay! Next, move to the city where you can enjoy FAST Internet, don't worry, you'll STILL be everyone's Prairie Princess!
    Edited on Apr 23, 9:35 because ''.

  • Night Hope gold member
    April 23, 2006
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    Sighhh...I can't download anything, Wayne...suse told me they sounded prettiful, though...The lyrics read well, so I'm quite sure they are...& in my case, that'd be a Hope~FULL Romantic... Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • wbiro gold member
    April 23, 2006
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    thanks, Click, that depends on which mood your in! Yes, tunes! lol


  • Prolific Poetess
    April 23, 2006
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    this was quite lovely

    definitely made my night


  • Rebel Rebel
    April 23, 2006
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    Tunes.

    I will check it out and see if I can get some music going tonight.

    I am feeling kinda of lonely and the sound would do me good. Thanks for the sharing. I will see which song I like best. I feel from the words that it will be song number one.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    April 23, 2006
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    This is really cool and unique. I really enjoyed these two pieces of poetry/songs. You got me thinking though, how did you do that? lol Anyway, thanks for sharing it!

    Allen0826

  • FindingFate
    April 22, 2006
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    Lovely work. You have a way with your words. Keep writing and thanks.


  • MissCassie
    April 22, 2006
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    Very Cute! I wish my speakers were working Well awesomeness anyways lol. I want you to be my uncle. You seem to be everyone else uncle adn I do not have one. lol. Be my uncle. lol. ttyl,
    Cassie


  • wbiro gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    thank you, my doting auntie!
    Edited on Apr 22, 11:12 p.m. because ''.


  • suseann
    April 22, 2006
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    Your a constant amazement to me. Multi talented,I'm just simple amaze at your inventiveness.Wonderful piece and music is grand my nefew.lol~~Suseann

  • natas6devi
    April 22, 2006
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    nice . small yet heavenly


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    awesome

    These were very soft and romantic. I did not need to hear the music with them, I heard it in my head.This was a great write. Thanks for sharing.
    Blessings,
    Victoria


  • wbiro gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    thanks, from one hopeless romantic to another...


  • TLRufener
    April 22, 2006
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    These two pieces just made my Saturday night. Excellent work with the words and the music.


  • wbiro gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    Yes, that's me who composed/played the music, too... glad you enjoyed on this Saturday night...


  • vampira1665 silver member
    April 22, 2006
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    Ohh, that was beautiful. Makes me cry!!! Life just F&*$ing sucks when you can't be where you want to be doesn't it?

    These were very soft and romantic. I did not need to hear the music with them, I heard it in my head.

    Very well done my pet!

    Hugs and bites, Your Partner in Death


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 22, 2006
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    cool. this is very unique but i really like it. i listened to both pieces and i like them each. is that you playing by chance? very cool music. vilanger


  • Ethereal One gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    very well written

    Lovely words and emotions in these 2 poems. I like the idea of melting in enchanted love. I enjoyed reading these both.

    etherealforu

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