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The Silver Screen

As the silver screen lights up,
And the room gets dark,
I feel your arm surrounding me,
While goosebumps run up and down my arm.

I can feel your heart beat next to me,
And feel your warm breath too,
Your voice rings softly in my ear,
Saying, "I love you".

I love you too,
I think and say,
You pull me closer to you still,
As scenes of everything flash before us.

I smile at this new found warmth,
That is engulfing me,
I love this feeling all around,
As it grows dark...the silver screen.

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Written April 22nd, 2006

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  • Edna Sweetlove
    September 18, 2006
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    Yes I remember snogging in the back row of the cinema. One day I was out with a new pick-up and I didn't know they wore glasses, I turned round for a big of tongue-sushi and nearly lost my eye on the corner of a big pair of specs. The scream rather spoiled the love scene on the screen and our neighbours came prematurely as a result.


  • exsisttoexit
    April 22, 2006
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    Nice poem. I could feel what you thought, and I thought that it was really good. Nice poem, and word choice. Good job, keep writing. : )
    Exs