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Most High

There are things in this world,
that bring you joy.

But not as much,
as a girl and boy.

Love holds within it,
nothing short of bliss.

The love pact can be sealed,
with one special kiss.

Before time began,
God wanted love to shine.

Now that we're all here,
it is most divine.

Nothing can replace,
the feelings you can feel.

When love is in charge,
even dreams seem real.

Author notes

I love LOVE!!!
Written April 22nd, 2006

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  • ChristopherMatsen
    April 22, 2006
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    Simple and sweet


  • buggirl
    April 22, 2006
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    This again is a really sweet poem, but I thought that it was kind of simple... the rhymes were good, but there wasn't anything special about them. Love should be special. I like the title though I thought that was very creative.

    Thanks for entering my contest

    Jen