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If only they knew...

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Over the years people did pretend,
loving nature and wanna be your friend.
But they never realised what in the end would be,
by following your trail and destroying your beauty.

When years went by life became a struggle for you,
why is it people do the things they do.
Don't they understand your nature at all,
can't they hear your emotional call.

Because of people hunting you, your pack falls apart,
that's what goes on in my mind and is breaking my heart.
When I hear you cry out loud for your missing sister and brother,
don't they know you have to live with one another.

Loneliness becomes more and more part of your life today,
why can't people not let you follow your own way.
Strength, beauty, compassion and loyalty,
If people only knew they would just let you be.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Sorry, didn't had the time to write one...but I am glad I could use the option of entering my fifth poem written....

Written April 22nd, 2006

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If people only knew they would just let you be.....

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  • Little Eagle Greeters member
    May 26, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry

    As a Native American I have an affinity for the Wolf. They are our spirit guides. Nicely written.

    God Bless
    Tammy


  • queen Moderators member
    May 26, 2008

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    I think a lot of animals get a bad wrap Good poem Good luck in the contest


  • catz Moderators member
    May 26, 2008

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    This is a very good plea for the wolves. And I'm glad it's your fifth poem posted as I might have not read it otherwise.
    A very poignant, compassionate piece and I wish you good luck in the contest

    Dee


  • Beating gold member
    February 7, 2008

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    In this line:
    "When years went by live became a struggle for you,"
    It should be "life" instead of "live".

    Other than that, I think this is a beautiful description of the wolf, full of compassion and understanding. I agree with everything you say!


  • The Poetic Angel
    July 2, 2007
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    i like this well done..very very true love the ending xxx cheeky xxx


  • liriel
    May 6, 2006
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    i like it good luck

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