How can the dark be so bright?
How can something so wrong still be right?
How can the sun never shine?
How can I be yours if you are not mine?
How can the moon and the sun never meet?
How can something so small leave me so obsolete?
How can the moon never seem to set?
How can something so safe be a threat?
Why can't the sun and moon collide
So I can finally become untied?
Author notes
ummm....yeah i know its probably confusing....or maybe not who knows i don't live in your brain......and yeah i know the backround is happy but hey its fun to mix it up....
Written April 22nd, 2006
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thanks i don't HA...but yeah....soccer tonight and its HOT...too bad........we are gonna run a lot after sundays game....sigh......see you there [already sweating]
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BTW...I LOVE THIS TITLE>..it's perfect for it
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GREATTTTTTTTT
Lauren! It's great..i love it...it's not confusing...nothing's odd about it...it's all normal to me..it seems to show alot of the ironic things that no one ever thinks about...which is pretty fucking sweet...And i love how u started with the big nature thing (moon...sun...life...) and ended the last line about nothing but you...it's sort of an upside down pyramid...it's all broad and then it slides down into your "point" ur BIG QUESTION...AWESOME>>>AWESOME -
i don't think it's confusing. in fact, i really like it. the rhyme flows well and the rhythm is great. the concept is weird, which may be the confusing part, but i like it a lot. well done. ^-^
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