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Jade, Kiara and their Ted E Bare

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Jade, Kiara and their Ted E Bare

Before you read any further...this is a very kinky erotic story about three people...you have been warned in advance just in case you have a problem with what may go on here...but on the other hand if you keep an open mind you may get in touch with a wild side you never had...let's begin...

 

 

 

 

I work at a strip club as a bouncer. I'm six foot two, two hundred twenty pounds, brown hair with blue-green eyes. My name is Ted and the ladies there have nicknamed me as their "teddy bear" for I protect them and they think I'm cuddly. My girlfriend, Jade, works here to. I'm secure about myself so if you're wondering how that could happen, now you know. She loves me and this is just another job. A hard one at that. Do you know that dancers are constantly on their feet from nine to twelve hours at a time. Not to mention when they have to perform. It's not just shaking your ass and tits at the audience. There's choreography involved matching moves with the music. It's not as easy as it looks. It's one of the most gruelling jobs, but can have an upside.

 

 

 

 

The guys, yes even couples, come in here to throw lots of cash down to watch these ladies strut their stuff. My darling is the main attraction as her name is on the Marquee as "Jade is better than any Diamond." You would think that I would be jealous at all of those guys getting those wonderful melons of hers rattled in their faces, but I don't. They are not allowed to touch and she only wants to be touched by me. She treats her exotic dancing as a job as she should. No matter what you have heard about dancers, they all don't do drugs, have big orgies, screw every guy that comes in the club...this only applies to a fraction of the ladies just like a dirty cop. Every occupation has a percentage of unwanted people giving their particular industry a bad name.

 

 

 

 

Of course that's not why you're here is it? You're here to see the entertainment so come on in. But be prepared for this doesn't happen at the strip club. See, I'm on my way home to see Jade(she didn't work tonight). It's her birthday and I thought of a unique way to celebrate. She has never done a threesome in her life and she's turning twenty one today. I'm fifteen years older than her, but she didn't care about my age when she fell in love. I've been around the block or two as she has a few times. Her heart has been broken to the point she thought she could never love again. She quit trusting men all together. Before you go there, she has never been with a woman in her life either. The closest she has ever been with a girl is a kiss on the lips and it was casual as in friendship. All that was about to change today. I just got off the phone with her and told her to be in the bedroom and have a blindfold on. It would be only ten minutes 'til I saw her and with the surprise.

 

 

 

 

Kiara was with me as she has had a crush on Jade for a long time. She knew Jade was turning drinking age and suggested the surprise as a birthday gift. I wish I could take the credit, but I know Jade was never into that stuff. I use to be back in my college days and I don't have those fantasies any more since I've since fulfilled them. I'm very happy and so in love with Jade. But I decided to see if she could get turned on by something she has never tried before.

 

 

 

There she was lying on the bed patiently with her eyes covered as requested. She was beautiful and her body like a naked goddess. She sensed my presence as I kissed her sweet lips and wished her happy birthday. Kiara waited patiently in the wings. I motioned her over as I started kissing down Jades body to her lucious breasts. That's when Kiara joined me. Jade was quite surprised when two sets of lips began pleasing her. I wasn't for sure how she would react! Her senses were tingly as she let it be known while she laid a hand each on our heads. Kiara and I licked and sucked her fine tits. Then we took our tongues and slid south on Jades heavenly being. She was moaning in ecstacy as she was headed for a new place of fulfillment. By this time we had Jades legs upon our shoulders as our tongues were dueling to enter her cave. Jade was screaming in joy by this moment. She had never dreamed about two tongues on her body, rather alone having both tongues deep inside her. She came within seconds but we didn't stop. We drank every bit of her juice like it was fortified vitamins. She came again and again all within two minutes. That's when I swung around and dropped my lollipop in her mouth to suck. No need to count how many licks it took to get to my tootsie-roll. She always knew how to make it work for me.

 

 

 

 

Kiara began licking back up her body until both their mouths were blessing my rod. It was Jades birthday, but why did I feel like I was the one getting the present. Then what happened next shocked me even more. Jade began to lick on Kiara. I had to focus my eyes to make sure I was seeing everything right. Jade was turning me on by the way her tongue painted on Kiara as I still had my manhood in Kiara's mouth. Kiara spread her legs open as Jade began to taste a lady for the very first time. Jade spun around so Kiara would be able to return the favor as I slid my tool inside her. Stroking her with each thrust while Kiara's tongue was slighty above me giving her a pleasure she thought could never happen. We did things for hours that I will leave for your imagination for time being. However, if you truly want to know the other details, then simply request it. I will let you know by the end of the threeway, Jade had told me that was the best birthday ever and the surprise was the greatest of her life.

Author notes

Stripper picture from this contest.

Other picture was on someone's poem along time ago and I saved it for future use!

This story is to help arouse even the most single/married person...hope I was able to get at least one person that way here!
Written April 22nd, 2006


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  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    February 13
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    Thank you for your deliciously sinful entry, Josie


    • Ted E Bare gold member
      February 13
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      Thank you for giving it an award. I will treasure that big shiny silver oneTed E


  • Loversdance
    November 1, 2008
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    Very nice, makes me wish my birthday was coming up, lol. Thanks so much for entering my contest!


  • ennovy silver member
    November 19, 2007

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    What A Happy Birthday

    she got from the two of you. Beautiful short story you done an excellent job on this threesome...You gonna do well if you publish...write on!,,,novy


  • raingoddess gold member
    November 7, 2007

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    Wonderful

    This is a wonderful short story, you have done a great job on the threesome, I wish there was a sequel, you opened a new gate of pleasure what a great birthday gift, thank you for entering my contest and good luck.

    raingoddess

    • Ted E Bare gold member
      November 11, 2007

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      I'm glad you enjoyed as well as Novy did. It was her comment that has me entertaining the idea to finally publish. Then again, you may know by now that I'm a true procrastinatorTed E


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    May 3, 2006
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    Deena, tyvm for that fantastic comment and I'm glad you found it to be a treat Ted E


  • Always Deena
    May 3, 2006
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    Well,you were right...this is a treat Just what I needed at 2:19am,to get all worked up and try again to sleep! You always know what I like. 's
    Thanks for Sharing! Dec 13th is my Birthday,lol
    Deena

  • Ted E Bare gold member
    May 1, 2006
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    tanzanite, I will have to work on it sometime especially since there is a very high demand for it...tyvm for your comment Ted E


  • tanzanite
    May 1, 2006
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    This is also part of my specific kink Ted - many more things are than just whips and chains. I am so glad you entered this into the contest as I believe that many view BDSM in a very restrictive fashion. I loved this, but where is the rest. I am asking for more details too. Yes, I know, quite shameless!!!!


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 23, 2006
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    Stardust-luvr, tyvm but its been back in my wild days, I do appreciate the nice comment, Ted E


  • Stardust-luvr
    April 23, 2006
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    Sensual

    my dear friend an exquisite write -- I'm not into 3somes but i must say it sure made me wish the gent I am sooooooooo inlove with was online right now for a bit of HOT convo.Thanx dear xxx

  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    Red Angel, since you asked...there are many things that are very true in this story...but some names and places have been changed for privacy reasons(lol). That's the good thing about drawing from experience when you write, it can be more believeable if it was close to the story. Thanks again for your wonderful comment, Ted E


  • aRdNeK
    April 22, 2006
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    Threesome!!! lol Hey, I have to ask - are these erotic stories true? haha Just curious, that's all. I can't say that I've had a threesome, but I don't know if I'd like that. But this is still a good poem, so don't get me wrong. And again, very descriptive, and yes, I can clearly see everything happening in my mind as I read it. Great job! Keep up the amazing work!

  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    Novy, I am starting to get the feeling maybe I should gear myself up soon to do that. In this past month alone I have written quite a bit of erotica and you ladies keep encouraging me which is a good thing. I want to do it professionally but had many doubts that I could. Those are start to wane now. And as for those ones that wanted to see the more detailed version of this (yet to be written) I will try to put it on my priority list. Thanks once again Ted E

  • ennovy silver member
    April 22, 2006
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    magnificent erotica

    Once again you have written a very erotic story. I loved the metaphors, and the bits of humor(tootsie-roll) tons of pure enchanting lust. You have totally out done yourself this time.
    Here's a big and because you are in the limelight! This could be a best seller, Ted E.!!! Why and when are you going to write a book? a triple, because we all love you and your explosive talent, write on!....Novy

  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    v-a-j, tyvm for such an encouraging comment on my erotica...just think this was the tame version as I asked the reader if they wanted to see a detailed version and I will start on that as soon as I can...might even be worth sticking in an erotica contest even!

    Ted E


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    Jay, I will definitely finish it and tyvm for the great comment!

    Ted E

  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    Stormy, I will finish this story sometimes since it does look like most of the comments, including your great one, calls for me to do just that!

    Ted E

  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    Rain, Not only am I flattered but blushing as well from such a hot and complimenting comment. Hope you will read more of my work and leave as impressing comments if my work warrants such a thing.


    Ted E


  • verse-atility-jac
    April 22, 2006
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    Who needs films, music or even the REAL THING lol, u r erotica re-invented, you are costing me a fortune in water with the amount of showers I have to take after reading your contests and the entries lol. When i became wifey no2 I obviously didn't realise what I was in for!!!!!J x


  • DistilledGin
    April 22, 2006
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    Hey...I want more...Anyway, this is a very great sexy story..I too have never been with another female...I don't think I'm planning on it anytime soon either...but I do like the fantasies of girl on girl...I hate man on man though it's weird...off a little..

    ~Gin~


  • DarkChildsKiss silver member
    April 22, 2006
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    {clears my throat}WOWWWWWWWWWW! OMG! Baby you heard the woman ^ ^, FINISH IT! We all want more soooooooooooo write more silly!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!

  • StormyGiggles
    April 22, 2006
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    Ted E... You are so mean... You get me goin and hot and then you just.. omg... Finish it! hahaha Seriously that's a terrible thing to do to someone... I might get BLUE PUSSY! AH! wow that would be scary... any way It was hot and sexy and... yeah like I said finish it... lol

    Hugs!

    Yours always,
    Stormy


  • April 22, 2006
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    amazing

    Holy shit...this was...exciting. lol. very very very nice job. hot indeed. yeah *ahem* congrats, my friend, your gift in writing obviously exceeds graceful and delicate words of love to fiery, dripping words of lust and passion. great write. i enjoyed reading it.

    -Rain-


  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    CH, tyvm for a delightful response Ted E


  • Angel-Crestfallen
    April 22, 2006
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    mmmmmmmmmm very nice

  • Ted E Bare gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    'barry91, tyvm for the very sweet comment and I will wait to see how many more will request the intimate details and then I may add the sequel giving them. Ted E

  • Nbarry91
    April 22, 2006
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    OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! This was sooooo erotic! I loved every line of it. And YES, I am requesting more! Great Erotic Write!!!!!

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