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Peach - nearly a tease



Fleshy peach

Lush

Soft to touch

Hold it close

Against

Warm moist lips

Sweet and aromatic

Slight pressure

Juice flows

I take it

In my mouth

Tongue moves

Delicately

Nearly a tease

Gently biting

Pulling slightly

Slow and easy

L o n g and l e I s u r e l y

Breathing deepens

Sweeping licks

Fluid seeps

From my mouth

Sticky

One more taste

Is all I need

Mmmmmmm

Ohhhh yessssssss

Kerrrrack

Ohhhhhhhhhhh

Shoot I bit

The lead

Smirks

Life sucks

Sometimes



sarajane

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Written April 22nd, 2006

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  • sarajaneUK
    June 14, 2006
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    lmao, i got an orange, any good?? oh. you want folding then? smirkles, ty for the comment and the appy. Ty jan


  • individuality gold member
    June 14, 2006
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    oh i could suck on a nice peache right now - i can just imagine the succulent juices dripping down my throat.
    spill ink and twist the kitchen sink's contents into me then paste me into an origami shape of love...


  • sarajaneUK
    May 16, 2006
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    Ty William for the comments and the applause too. I'm still rummaging in the box! smirkles. sj

  • william mae
    May 16, 2006
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    Ahh, what a peach, every peach is not that good, but oh when you find one that is, mmmmmmmmmm its worth the look and the wait. "loved it"

  • sarajaneUK
    April 23, 2006
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    smirks. ty.


  • shuggie
    April 23, 2006
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    Very very good Sj as the other comment said you are a naughty girl but an excellant piece I almost said it flowed well but I wont tee hee.Brilliant inspired piece.Shug


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    Great

    Very well written and I would to be enjoyed like that!! Um anyway really great read!

  • Uriah Hamilton
    April 22, 2006
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    good

    This is the way life should suck!! I swear I do my best to find such peaches!!


  • Swtpoetryman
    April 22, 2006
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    A NORTY GIRL and A FINE LADY!

    I've been known to enjoy the entoxicating juice of a sweet peach (fuzzy or not) on many a fine occasion from a lovely and sexy English rose! AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! A very fine and stimulating piece (pun intended) after awakening from me rainy day slumber! YESSSSSS, a very FINE & STIMULATING piece, indeed! There's nothing wrong with being NORTY when your as sweet and loving as SARA JANE! Me thinks me may be in love or is it lust! Either way the feeling's a GOOD ONE!
    Peace & Love!
    Earl.

    Worthy of my ast applause of the day!


  • Ashes of a Shadow
    April 22, 2006
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    ha ha - innuendos abound, i enjoy this playful style its non-prentatious poetry (unlike my writes he he!) very very amiable - wickid!


  • sarajaneUK
    April 22, 2006
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    Pffft! Linda!!! how could you think such a thing! tsk tsk woman, you got me nearly all wrong!. I do write (occasionally) non smut allpoetry.com/Poem/1954023 . I can see i shall have to consider changing the habits of a lifetime, hangs head in shame.... Ummmm, it lasted all of 20 seconds...smirks. Ty for reading and commenting, much appreciated. onwards and upwards....sj

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