One wrong look
and it breaks,
my heart,my soul
covered in tar black
darkness. Clogs up the throat.
Tears behind my eyes
in their duct, forming,
chemistry,
Just like us
building and breaking
bonds of reactions of
love and hate. Two
bodies, one soul, comes
into the equation.
Like 2 plus 2
minus a couple.
Just like us
breathing in molecular structures
down the larynx passing the pharynx,
now oesophagus. Greek Myth.
of one who takes
your breath away.Helplessness
left after. Gasping
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Written April 22nd, 2006
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Picturess imagery. An excellent write I must say. Very beautiful expression of love, coming together, and lasting hope for another day of simply complex happiness. Wonderful work.....
Crash -
omg!!!!!!!! this is amazing...brilliant and powerful and lovely...such an amazing write! i cannot get over the wonderfulness of this piece, the sheer poetry of it! wow....what a nice surprise, how refreshing this reading of your poem...it's ice cold water down a parched esophagus
amazing, darling. simply amazing.
anyonita -
thank you for your warm words. it is greatly appreciated.
ania -
GOOD TRY!NOT BAD!
FROM SUKRIT
GOOD LUCK!THIS IS NOT BAD!GO ON WRITE MORE!
WARM REGARDS
YOURS SINCERELY
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