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Resist

Alone she sits with all her pain
 She knows where to find me, dancing in the rain
   How things are changed between the two of us
     Tomorrow comes and brings what it must
       Our lives are forever entwined by whats on our arms
         Now we go our separate ways because I can finally resist her charm

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People who know me, know how much meaning is behind these words and how long its taken me to finally be able to say them.  And live them...
Written April 21st, 2006

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  • spawnworship
    October 17, 2006
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    Ms.Blaze i bid you good evening. well, where to begin? We have known each other for a very long time. I know this story so no words do I need to say save one. Heal.....there is nothing but time and you....ink does not define the person...the person defines the ink. So whenyou look at your arm it should read "I am always my own being".......got it??? I'll leave the instructions here just incase. 1. pour yourself into your hands 2. lather 3. rinse and repeat until the time is right.

    ~Spawn~


  • XChloroform-KissesX
    April 26, 2006
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    *hugs* And I, for one, am so incredibly glad that you are aware of what she did to you. My only suggestion for change, is that maybe in the line,"Our lives are forever tied by whats on our arms," should maybe read more like, "Our lives forever entwined by the words etched into our arms."? Or maybe instead of words, by the script/fate/fortune? Just a possibility.. *hugs again* I love you.. ~XChloroform-KissesX


  • SilverDragon
    April 21, 2006
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    I like how you put it on a slant, it adds to the piece a lot. Great job, those poems are hard to write,(palandrome? is that what its called?) I'm glad your life is going back to normal and that you are home again (now we can talk more), and that your free of ashton's influence.