Feel as these hand caress within
places not known but somewhere along the
way, think up of enough thoughts to
carry the formulated word, masturbation,
into a tailspin of jealousy...
These ears hear that unsteady
moan/gasp of breath; tell me
what you desire--and I'll promise
you that not even the winds would be
able to provide a sculpture of what
we're doing
Watch a liquid flow ignite
another sultry conclusion
Author notes
Hmmm I think this is what you asked for
Written April 21st, 2006
In a list
A contest entry
- Au Naturel by MuddyKing.
300 points, ended May 1, 2006, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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lol okay but who is Leo2???
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It's not often I'm dumbfounded by a presentation. After a brief pause I admit this one did. Being a lover of erotica of all types from the crude, hardcore bordering on the downright vulgar to the tasteful, elegant, refined more tender kind I must say this ranks high up in the latter category. I especially like the comparison of masturbation and the honest to goodness real thing. The kind intercourse that just leaves you speechless and your body trembling in a jelly like mass on the bed. I regret that I can give but one applause to the superbly classic offering.
Warm regards,
Frightendove
ps. I wonder how the hell I'm going to keep this secret from Leo2. If he finds out he's sure to come over here and sweep you off your feet and spoil all my fun.
pss. Psssst I won't tell if you don't.
psss. Oh goodie goodie, I found a virtual gold mine!!!!!
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Awhhhhh! Now that I've read it,not quite sure what to say. However,it is very interesting concidering the accompaning image. Thought provolking to say the least.Ha!~~~~Suseann
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LOL
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sizzlin' hot and whew...i better go back outside and do some yard work....
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Rowan,
I told him in the comment box of his contest that I don't know the meaning of the word, 'gentle'.....Lol
But nevertheless, ty for the comment and compliment
Rae -
Oh..wow Ayizan..I think he asked you to be gentle with him!
Very erotic, and beautifully sensual. Loved it!
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