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Grr

He is an asshole
I hope he fucking dies now
Never really cared.

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Written April 21st, 2006

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  • Argon1442
    October 19, 2006
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    this was a very interesting poem. i thought that it might have been a little short, but besides that it was different. nice write!


  • Lancashire Lad
    May 26, 2006
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    ok that was strong hatred but good words tht u used tho x


  • ForgottenxMe
    May 20, 2006
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    WOW... umm i canrelate. adn yea. but you know its not true. at one point you did care, its jsut something went teriblly wrong and now you dont. but i cant judge
    ~nerny


  • April 22, 2006
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    I agree.
    I'll kill that asshole.. IF I ever meet him.


  • sanmdr
    April 22, 2006
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    good write ..emotions .. in deep words


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    April 22, 2006
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    LOL, sorry but it struck mr a funny. I know there's anger behind his and I'm sorry, and I'll echo what Linda King hoped...that you got it out of your system.

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