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A Moment.



                       A Moment.


            Sensuous silken limbs on satin soft
            Stolen timeless repose.
            White purity subtle ebony strands.
            Leather soft bound Wisdom
            joins Swiss chocolate  cognac        
            purifying body,mind and soul.

            No existence
            No time
            Woman and Comfort recline
            Two lovers embrace as one.




Author notes

Image inspired sensuous almost sinful repose.
Written April 21st, 2006

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  • buffytheparrotslaye
    April 27, 2006
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    Enjoyed the Contest and it is probably quite interesting to see all the different interpretations.Will read some of the entries too as time permits.
    Good Luck judging.
    Elizabeth.

  • buffytheparrotslaye
    April 27, 2006
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    Thank you Gill for and commenting.And not a man in sight!love it.
    Elizabeth.


  • Cat gold member
    April 27, 2006
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    Chilly takes all the best comments!

    elizabeth- what chilly said.. too.

    So fun to read your take on this image- thank you for entering the contest.

    m


  • NurseChilly gold member
    April 27, 2006
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    Hell yes- that's my kind of bedroom feast... chocolate, cognac and a bloody good book and no man in sight... hehehheheh

    yepp... this is the bare bones of it all, liked this one alot Elizabeth.. you done good girl..

    ~GILL~x
    many thanks for entering our contest and good luck

  • buffytheparrotslaye
    April 22, 2006
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    Thanks Alex!What the hell is cong-ac?Sounds like some kind of an eel.Am going to correct now.Appreciate you picking up on this.Love.Elizabeth.x

  • buffytheparrotslaye
    April 22, 2006
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    And it was sweet of you to read and commeny favourably.Silk and Satin,that's Liz!


  • shubs
    April 22, 2006
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    Superbly sensual and brilliantly portrayed in the most suitable way for the portrait on display and you are a master of eloquent thoughts..treat to read this Liz Shubs


  • Floorboards
    April 22, 2006
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    i must have missed this one,very good again.i love the imagery you use,is "cong ac",supposed to be "cognac"? or have i misinterpreted?
    alex.

  • buffytheparrotslaye
    April 21, 2006
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    Thank you Jim.As I looked at the image it spoke of rest in the purest yet most sensuous of settings.A feeling of silk and repose.
    And yes that Swiss chocolate is so smooth on the tongue.It is interesting to hear that your family has its roots in Bern.A friend visited there and told me how charming.Have you ever been back to look up family history?something you might enjoy in your retirement.
    Stay well and do appreciate your reading.
    Your friend.Elizabeth.


  • Wandika gold member
    April 21, 2006
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    A very delicate write Elizabeth.
    I do like Swiss chocolate.
    My family is from Bern in 1860.

    Best of luck in the contest.

    Jim

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