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And Yet Free


                   
                   There is no light with sweeter glow
                   Nor greeting better than hello
                   Nor touch as pleasant as Your hand
                   That lifts me up to stand.
                   
                   There is no better love than Yours
                   To end at last my inner wars
                   To hold me in sweet mystery—
                   Captive, and yet free.                    
                   
                   
                   

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Short & sweet. Hope you enjoy.
Written April 21st, 2006

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  • noble1
    May 3, 2006
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    I had to come back and read this again...what a delight your poetry is and so full of His life! I am blessed to be able to read them! Please, write some more....its been a while! God bless! Noble1


  • Mamabekaboo
    April 22, 2006
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    Wow this is beautiful. You have done an excellent Job once again. I am glad I can read your work because it does give me joy.
    Because He Lives,
    Beka


  • -ButterflyCuts-
    April 21, 2006
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    gorgeous... lovely rhyme.. rich language and flow and content.. beautiful
    jess

  • Am I Will 626
    April 21, 2006
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    very well written.that seems like a rather intimate union.thanks for sharing


  • Karen Layne
    April 21, 2006
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    Aw, how pretty! thanks you for sharing it

  • noble1
    April 21, 2006
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    You've enveloped in this short poem the very essence of Christ's friendship with us. How dear and intimate your relationship with Jesus must be in order to pen that He holds your heart captive and yet you are blissfully free! Thanks for sharing this. AMAZING!


  • Terri Norris silver member
    April 21, 2006
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    This is SO VERY BEAUTIFUL!
    Yes, I enjoyed it very, very much.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Always,
    Terri Norris

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