Are you thinking of me?
Because I can picture nothing,
But your smile,
And your shining eyes,
Always on the brink of tears,
A freewheeling festival of pain,
But they never come for you,
On your self-imposed island,
Where the nightmare faces leer from the canyons,
Pulling you away from the light,
But if you want any consolation,
If they force you to jump,
I jump too.
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Written April 21st, 2006
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Nice write. Sas, but sweet. I like the ending.
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TRULY BEAUTIFUL!
A most beautiful poem of your love totally and sincerely.
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Great piece filled with emotion. Loved the flow and form and the messages are deep and provoking! Keep your pen forever flowing!
Bunny
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i like this, even though it is very short it has a lot of emotion to it and is also very deep. this is a very well written piece, well done
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Very awesome I loved the whole thing. It's very deep with a great message behind it. I love the last two lines "If they force you to jump,
I jump too." That's amazing. Great write keep it up and thanks for sharing.
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i share the feeling behind your words...thank you for sharing
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very deep
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