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She's Likin my man

i cant sleep knowing
that bitch is in your home
Where all around you
She's free to roam

You may not like her
But that wont stop her goal
She'll find a way to get you
Because she's a fuckin troll

she can sneek into your room,
nevermind who lies asleep
Crawl into your warm bed,
And fall into something deep

If it's not sleep she wants
She'll get the other too
She dont care about you'r feelings,
Cuz what she wants is you

but i tell you rite now
Lemme find out she's gettin fresh
and i swear to you rite now
I'll rip her heart out of her chest

She's fuckin with the wrong girl
She done gone and got me mad
Just gimme a reason to beat her ass
And i'll do worse than bad

I'll stab her blind ass eyes out
Then tie her too the floor
I'll cut off all her fingers
I'll stab that fuckin hore

I'll rip her tainted tounge out,
And fry her rotting brains
I'll let scarabs eat her flesh
Until she goes insane

I will stop for nothing
Until that bitch is dead,
But the very last ill do to her,
Is chop off her fuckin head,

She's a flirty lil slut
Will you please concur?
Papi, its not you that i dont trust,
No, Papi, its her...

Author notes

im pissed cuz my boyfriends couzins are staying for two weeks at his house.  His cousin brought her friend and she fuckin literally throws herself at my boyfriend, hes allways pushing her away, and yelling at her, and callin her names, but she just doesnt seem to get it.  We went golfing together, his family came along, *including her* and she was still all over him, then when i said somthing about it she got all defensive and called me a fuckin wet back and a beaner.  she's lucky i didnt beat her ass.
Written April 21st, 2006

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  • rosebud86
    July 24, 2006
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    wicked but totally my style sorry i could not witness these events i would have helped


  • Melodies
    April 21, 2006
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    Well, whatever happened, you sure as heck double done got back at her in this very powerful kick-ass poem! This is an amazing poem and should be in a movie or something. I like it very much..so much really good descriptive language. Gads, you had a lot to get off your chest and you did it amazingly well. GREAT!