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Lavender Field of Dreams

Lavender sweet Elysium fields,
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Ambrosia lure scents appealing.
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Vivacious beauty spreads so real,
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Elated senses swirl into a skyblue ceiling.
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Never can my lips reveal what my heart takes in.
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Dazzled and dizzy consumed in field pretty,
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Earthbound sure but my wings take to flight.
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Reeling in pleasure of lavender treasure delight.
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                      Suseann

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Written April 20th, 2006

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  • Iktomi
    April 22, 2006
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    wow, you have described the "feel" of the picture and color very well... I can't help but think of lavender and the smell of spring when I read your poem.


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    THANKS FOR THE TRIP INTO THE BEAUTIFUL WORLD

    You have captured the picture and the wonder of nature so very well. I can smell the lilacs now.

  • ea silver member
    April 21, 2006
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    Encore Provence!