If dreams came true I'd be with you,
beyond any doubt or reason.
Loving & being loved by you
would come as natural as breathing.
You'd be by my side regardless of what happened.
I wouldn't have to constantly remain a pessimist & scorn at your discretion.
Though last time I checked the skies still blue,
I'm still me.
You're still you.
I could love you unconditionally.
I know you could love me too.
But only....
If dreams came true
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Choice 1
Written April 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- Finish Me.... by Samplette.
300 points, ended April 22, 2006, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Very nicely done, great to see you back penning here at AP!!
And yes what a wonderful world it would be if those dreams came true. -
Very nice...and I enjoyed the subtle rhymes. Excellent writing. Thank you for following the rules and entering the contest.
SAm
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this poem was good. great job. i feel the emotions. go head and pour your feelings out
naw just playin but i really did like it
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Hmm seems like we have simular dreams, very strong feeling I got from your poem, great work!
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