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Broken Loser

Hurt and broken,
Hidden in shame,
Herself thrown across,
Tossed about.

Hidden in her own shame,
Behind a vail of thoughts,
What should she do,
How can she face the world?

They destroyed her,
Ruined,
How can she live on,
And pretend....nothing happened?

Author notes

It was about this picture: i40.photobucket.com/albums/e209/epsilina/KatietheGypsy.jpg
So for the contest option 1.
Written April 20th, 2006

A contest entry

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  • exsisttoexit
    April 20, 2006
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    That's pretty good, and I'm glad that you decided to dare to acctually take that subject, it was sort of hard, and a really weird picture. Good job though.