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Happy birthday sweet nephew

The day you were born
the sun was shining.
Everyone did adorn
this lovely boy,smiling.

You were the world to us
mom and dad both very happy.
Now their life had a new boss;
a sweet son so lovely.

We’re enjoying our life
with you much better.
Having you cost all the strife
our lovely boy,little sir.

Mom and daddy’s happiness
now completed with you.
You’re the symbol of sweetness
the love shines in your eyes too.


Happy birthday sweet nephew
wish you all the best,
your auntie loves you too.
In mom’s lap have some rest.

Shahrzad
2006-04-21

Author notes

This is a piece dedicated to my lovely nephew Ole. He’s Jim’s(starhiker) and Monica’s son. Happy birthday sweetheart. He’ll be 4 years old in 21st April.


Written April 20th, 2006

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  • Ir.muse
    April 26, 2006
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    Yes, he loves him very much. He's really a lovely son, I saw him on his daddy's webcam when his daddy was talking to someone else, but I clicked on the cam and saw his son who came to him for some minutes there.
    He featured the poem for me.
    Thank you for your lovely comment.
    Love you,

    Shahrzad


  • Shakari
    April 26, 2006
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    This piece is sweet and beautiful. It flowed well, rhmed awesomely, and had a bit of imagery too! Keep up the great work! I am sure that Starhiker feels blessed to have such a wonderful son...and you, an AP nephew.

  • Ir.muse
    April 25, 2006
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    Hi dear grandpa

    Thank you for your nice comment. I'm popular?

    Shahrzad


  • Lyndon gold member
    April 25, 2006
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    You are so popular, sweet one , because you are so generous with your lovingkindness. This devoted poem, rhyming so well, is an example of what I am saying. God bless you and keep you. Ron

  • Ir.muse
    April 24, 2006
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    Thank you dear friend for your nice comment.
    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    April 24, 2006
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    Thank you dear sister.
    Shahrzad


  • blondone
    April 24, 2006
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    a very sweet poem for your nephew well written poetry say happy birthday from all of us thanks


  • wings of an angel
    April 24, 2006
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    Very nice write sis that you did for Jims son

  • Ir.muse
    April 23, 2006
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    Thank you very much for your nice wish. He's starhiker's son; a very lovely boy who turned to 4 some days ago.
    Shahrzad


  • Sonja
    April 23, 2006
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    This is so cute verses and full of your aunts love. My best wishes to your nephew too from the deep of my heart.
    ~Sonja~

  • Ir.muse
    April 22, 2006
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    Thank you dear Kevin for your nice comment.
    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    April 22, 2006
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    Thank you dear auntie for your lovely comment.
    Love you,
    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    April 22, 2006
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    Thank you dear friend for your nice comment.
    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    April 22, 2006
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    Thank you dear friend.
    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    April 22, 2006
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    Thank you dear Sam for your wonderful comment. Family is a very important issue in Iran; my country.
    Shahrzad


  • Puppydog gold member
    April 22, 2006
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    A VERY BEAUTIFUL BIRTHDAY POEM

    Just beautiful my friend. I am sure his day will be wonderful and happy.


  • Sandygram
    April 22, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Oh this was sooooo sweet Shahrzad. I hope his birthday is filled with joy and his wishes come true. This was quite lovely. Take care, Aunt Sandy
    Edited on Apr 22, 5:23 because ''.


  • gullionmar
    April 21, 2006
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    happy b-day to your nephew this is well written full of love keep up the good writng

  • SurrenderMyHeart
    April 21, 2006
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    aww how sweet


  • wtchr
    April 21, 2006
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    I like this lovely poem. It is written well and is a fitting birthday wish to the little fellow, BUT... what I like best is the reaffirmation of family. In this day of frenzied living, it is WONDERFUL, to me, to see interaction of family members not in direct contact with each other. I love all the gentle, happy feelings you have expressed for your nephew. We have come to embrace the "family unit", as well we should, but here you have clearly shown that family is a blanket, it stretches over many many members of ones linage. It is there to comfort, protect, and unify those that we need hold dear. Thank you for a reminder that "family" is still a warm and loving term for beloved family members near and far.

  • Ir.muse
    April 21, 2006
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    Thank you dear Nermin for your nice comment.
    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    April 21, 2006
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    Thank you dear Gary. You know they loved this poem too and I'm glad I could make them happy. His daddy (starhiker) featured the poem for me.
    Shahrzad


  • Nermin Nazim
    April 21, 2006
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    wonderful

    this is beautiful and as fresh as a new born, it radiates happiness and love and really shines with bliss. great write!


  • Driftwood
    April 21, 2006
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    Bravo!!!

    This was a great tribute from you to their son. So sweet of you to write such wonderful words. Your pretty good at this and I just love the one you wrote to me also. Fantastic and really hope they enjoy this, for which I know that they will. Great job sis. Gary

  • Ir.muse
    April 21, 2006
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    Thank you dear friend. Mine is on 30 April.
    Shahrzad


  • Wesley Storer
    April 21, 2006
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    Birthday divinity

    Happy birthday to Auntie too when it comes around, Aunti shahrzad! Your sincerity rings true as sterling silver.

  • Ir.muse
    April 21, 2006
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    Thank you dear vilanger. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this.
    Shahrzad


  • Viyanna Rosemarie silver member
    April 21, 2006
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    how sweet. happy birthday to your nephew. a poem such as this is always a good gift that will be cherished for years to come. i hope he has a great birthday. vilanger

  • Ir.muse
    April 21, 2006
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    Thank you dear friend.
    Shahrzad

  • Ir.muse
    April 21, 2006
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    Great to see your comment here dear brother.
    I asked you his birthday some weeks ago and for his birthday is in my birthday month; so I remembered it.
    Thank you for your comment. I'm glad I could surprise you.
    Shahrzad

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