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Just another thought about love

Always in my mind,
I love it when your close,
I can feel your breath,
On my cheek.

I smile as I think,
How much I love you,
Harder to describe,
Yet so easy to say.

You whisper in my ear just then
Those 3 simple words,
Filled with all the meaning,
Of our entire world.

My love goes farther than anything,
And you can hardly imagine,
No one can imagine
Times infinity.

Forever I know this will last,
Until the end of time,
When everything turns black,
And we are all gone.

You have to leave now,
You give me a soft kiss,
I smile and wave,
As you leave me.

You still fill my mind,
And my heart,
Any my soul,
I love you.

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Number 2, love story, kind of obvious
Written April 20th, 2006

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  • Heartofacircle
    April 28, 2006
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    yeah lol this is kinda ovious.. and this was also so well done, so much love here, thanks for sharing, best of luck in my contest here..