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A Magical Memorial




A Magical Memorial


Albus, oh Albus,
So clever and wise
Possibly foolish from age
Through some wizard’s eyes.

Though your words were frequently few,
Strong, thoughtful, and great,
You inspired many professors and students,
Within your school’s charmed gates.

A character of such patience and trust
Through your half-moons everlastingly shown,
You’re simply the best Headmaster
That Hogwarts had ever known.

Your great talents in magic
Were exceedingly greater than bold;  
Always greatly admired by many
With your caring heart of gold.

Though even under your protection
Lurked such evil a foe,
That none other than Severus Snape
Delivered your fatal blow.

Your special protection had been greatest
Since young Harry to the Potters was born;
Even with his best friends at his side
His heart hit deepest when he was left to mourn.  

When the tears shed by Harry Potter
Over losing you forever had barely dried,
Ron and Hermione given the chance to turn back
United for your cause joined him faithfully at his side.

As a trio, they’ll seek out the Horcruxes
For your wish as you eternally rest,
Lord Voldemort’s seventh bit of dark soul, too,
They’ll destroy when they finish your quest.

But as Fawkes’ musical cries of lament fill the air,
Many a-tear from weeping eyes downpour,
As your beloved friends at Hogwarts say
A Fondest Goodbye…Dear Dumbledore.

 R.I.P.  

Author notes

In Memory of Albus Dumbledore
Greatest Headmaster at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry.
In case you were wondering…Yes, this was also inspired just shortly after finishing Book 6 of Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince.
(I struggle a lot with rhyming words in poems-which is why I tend to stick to free verse-but I felt inspired to make this one rhyme. I do hope it came out alright.)
Written April 20th, 2006

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  • A1der4ya
    October 11, 2007
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    I am not a fan of Harry Potter but you sure made me interested. This is an excellent poem, it captures the reader and takes us on an enchanting journey. Guess I'll have to go and purchase the books now or at least see the movie. LOL Thanks!


    Candice


  • Amera gold member
    July 24, 2007

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    This turned out very well and id keeps the readers interest. You are a born poet and have the heart of a poet. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    June 26, 2006
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    This is wonderful and Excellent!!
    I love it!!
    Very nicely written!! Withc an excellent rhyme, flow and choice of words. I'm surprised you did not win a trophy with this!

    Keep on writing,
    Nooni


  • Amythest Moonjade
    April 29, 2006
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    Congratulations

    Merry meet,
    Congratulations on an Honorable Mention. This is a good tribute to Albus. I cried at the end too, although I'm not too sure he really is dead. We'll see in the next book. Again, Congratulations.

    Amythest


  • wakingdevil
    April 24, 2006
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    Great poem and the rhyme was good as you used it alternative lines and it was not forced.Good and sad poem.best of luck in the contest!

  • in-the-twilight
    April 23, 2006
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    I love Harry Potter!!!!!!!!!!!!! They are great books and I am sad that it will end after book 7!!!!!!! The end of that book made me cry, and I couldnt get it out of my mind for like a week!!!!!!! The last sentence was amazing... I cant believe the author doesnt like any of her books past number 4... it makes me sad!!!!!!! The next book is going to kick butt!!!!!!! I cant wait until the sixth book comes out on video!!!!!!! Rock On Aunty Julie!!!!!!!

    xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
    Meg


  • Blazing White Wolf
    April 23, 2006
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    this is a very god write julie the rhyme is strong and the flow good you did the book and yourself proud with one
    love and light
    youe Wretch


  • queen Moderators member
    April 20, 2006
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    This is fantastic, i think its just right. I love all the Harry potter stories, im just a big kid at heart


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 20, 2006
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    Loved the books as well as the movie, I think this came out very lovely, and I appreciate your entry, and wish you all the best!

    -Timothy The Poetic Weaver~


  • Faerie Me
    April 20, 2006
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    oh Ats! I love Harry Potter too! 31 yrs old and I still love the books! Can't even get my kids to read them. But great job on the poem. Talk to ya later!
    Dana

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