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Happy Birthday Dad

Never has there ever been
A father on this earth
That was so kind and loving
From the first day of my birth

I scrape my knee you hold me
I cry and get a hug
I smile and then get tickled
I laugh and get a snug

I wish you all the happiness
This special day can bring
For a father that’s so special
You must have hidden wings



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Written April 20th, 2006

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  • irene plunkett
    May 7, 2006
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    this is a sweet poem and is a very lovin poem u show all ya love and carin side in this piece from ya grandaughter irenexxxx


  • Dark-Princess
    April 30, 2006
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    This is so sweet!
    Dark-Princess


  • queen Moderators member
    April 20, 2006
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    I have always been a daddies girl


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    April 20, 2006
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    love for a parent is so awesome to have, happy to see this as you don't really see enough of this on AP.. thank you for sharing and good luck..
    Linda


  • FifthDove
    April 20, 2006
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    Thank you very much


  • Stingersinger53 gold member
    April 20, 2006
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    This is so sweet! I guess it's wonderful to have such a loving and caring father! Good for you!!

  • heart on sleeve
    April 20, 2006
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    sweet poem very nice indeed for a father who must now how greatly he is loved, it's short and simple with a simple rhyme,
    the second stanza you wrote
    i scrape me knee
    i'm not sure if you meant to write this but i think it should be
    i scrape my knee

    abigail


  • doughjoe silver member
    April 20, 2006
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    opps I forgot, here's an applause.


  • doughjoe silver member
    April 20, 2006
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    I like this one very much I never knew my dad, but if I did I would want him to be just like this. thanks for making me think.
    Edited on Apr 20, 2:58 p.m. because ''.

  • Ir.muse
    April 20, 2006
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    wow...a lovely poem for your dad dear friend. It's so special and nice.
    Wish you the best luck in the contest.
    Shahrzad

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