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The Ending

You and I, will never last,
Memories are left, but in the past.
Sweet fragranced breeze, will never last,
The smell remains as a memory, but it doesn't last.
We smile with joy, it will never last,
Sorrow beckons, smiles are in the past.
Taning sun, touches the sea,
Thick blackness leads, what can we see?
A world with failure,
With no hope at all.
Why do we dream,
When there's no point at all.

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Written April 20th, 2006

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  • evie28
    April 20, 2006
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    Beautifully

    Great job, you give me this weird touching feeling when I read this, like things that are important, wont last..
    It gives a great idea how this poem is written, dark yet so expressive.. I especially like the last part : a world with failure,with no hope at all, why do we dream, when there's no point at all.. <--- The best part which describes the whole idea with this poem. Super great job, impressive short and very powerfull! -=Evie=- *flower*