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A Woman

There is sweetness in every woman’s breath
I know because I’ve smelled it
There is electricity in every fiber of her skin
I know because I’ve felt it

There is warmth in her touch
A calm in her voice
And tenderness to her kiss
I know because I want it

I want what I can’t have right now
But darling it won’t be long
Till I’m back in Paradise
With you in my arms

Author notes

I hope this gets you motor running.   I so Miss the the tenderness of a women.  I guess it's the price I pay for being in Iraq.
Written April 20th, 2006

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  • nansie
    September 2, 2006
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    Great

    I hope you will soon be in your paradise


  • Sandygram silver member
    June 5, 2006
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    This was cute my friend. I am sure you have turned on many a motors with your beautiful poetry over the years. Sweet and passionate.A perfect match for poetry. Thank you for the wonderful read this morning. Take care and stay safe. Smiles, Sandy


  • Moon Fae
    May 8, 2006
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    Nicely written and very true. Hope you are back home safely very soon. Peace - Jillian


  • saffireblueangel
    May 5, 2006
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    that is a really nice poem.


  • Cupcrazy
    May 4, 2006
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    Very nice piece filled with yearning. Loved it. Hey I'm a single girl, not good to get my motor running, lol..Keep up the great writing! Take care Bunny

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