A wee beastie?
What is that?
What kind of monster
Could this be?
Look at her
Brown glowing eyes
Glaring out at you
From under your bed
From in your closet
From there
She brings you your dreams
Weaves them in
Along with the nightmares
This beastie of sorts
Is covered in fur
With a mane of spiral curls
That is not quite brown
Not quite white
She can brag
Of her devil impish tail
And of golden feathered wings
But she envies
The night
That adorns the moon
But where did she
Come from?
This wild beastie monster?
I'll tell you
Because I know
Where she had come
She had come
From the mystic dream caves
From deep within the dark forest
She had traveled across the lands
To find the place
Where they hung the moon
But she has yet to find it
So she decided that your room
Would be a nice place to stay
You wonder why
That I know these things
I will tell you this
I AM THE WEE BEASTIE
<3
Author notes
I AM the wee beastie
Written April 20th, 2006
A contest entry
- closed by honey bear.
350 points, ended April 25, 2006, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A Family Picnic, Invite Only by Lady-Pegasus.
1050 points, ended June 21, 2007, 23 entries
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Aww, this is sweet. I think its a child's toy you are describing, right? I can see a little stuffed pegasus with silver wings. That is my thought anyway, though maybe you meant something completely different. Anyway, this was both cute and original. Congratulations on the Silver Trophy!
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"The night that adorns the moon" a beautiful turn of phrase wee beastie. This describes you to a t
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This is cute!! I always wondered where you came from! Adorable story. Gotta love the W. B.
Jeannie
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congratulations on a silver trophy for this wonderful write
i have seen those eyes peering out at me from under the bed hee hee hee.
keep up the good work my wee beastie!
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Thank you for your contest submission as well as for following the rules. Yikes, so YOU are the one responsible for my weird dreams huh? I'll GEt you for that my wee friend
Very cute piece, thank you for joining in the fun! 
Best of luck in this and all of your endeavors. Hetohke'e 
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bows phoenix head to brilliant write.lol
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Very cute Poem, made a Teddy Bear seem a bit sinister though..lol..Oh well hope no little kidlets get nightmars from this...Heh...Scott
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nice good poem
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Wish I had a Wee beastie under my bed lol lol.
Lovely story line, enchanting.
Well done & good luck in the contest -
lovely
he he he and i shall slide you trays of goodies under the bed and leave you sweet chocolates by my closet to tempt you out
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