my eyes flutter open with a sigh
by the tender caress of your work worn hands
awoken from my dreaming slumber
to find a world between the two so pure
your gentle kiss burns into my soul
making me come alive with the need for you
i open up to your gentle grace
feeling your caress deepen in my core
your burning kiss leaves me shivering
as the heat of your mouth trails down my body
my breath quickens with your pace
leaving me lost in the smoldering dream
so long I've been without your touch
only living it within my wakeful slumber
love flows freely though us both
as your length and weight press upon me
we join as one and my tears fall
my dreams have become a reality for once
as we slowly reach our highest edge
the words of love are passed between our hearts
we fall to gather breathless with love
not able to move beyond the moment of release
softy caressing your dampened hair
i slowly slip back into a blissful slumber
Author notes
My first very personal semi srotic poem..tell me what u think
Written April 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- Anything goes by Lilith the Immortal.
350 points, ended April 27, 2006, 2 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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nice job the words flowing with emotion good job keep it up
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*HUGS* yeah I know who this was bout love
tell him I said hi . Now then I love this they way you have made a love poem but at the same time made it erotic very good work and Thank you love for entrying my contest *kisses*
Forever into the Darkness
Sarah
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