My first date, finally!
Oh I hope I look okay!
Oh man major B.O!!!
Perfume! Perfume!
I need French perfume!
Don't ask me why it has to be French
All I know is that French girls seem to have fun!
It must be the perfume they wear
For they have a lot of under hair
Oh great I ripped my skirt
Clumsy me!
Oh man that was the only thing clean!
Wait I have a pair of baggy jeans!
That looks okay even if they're falling down
A glass of warm chocolate milk
This will calm me down
Shit! I spilt it, not just on the ground
Oh no!
He's here!
What will I do!
'Hey you' I say as I open the door
'What happened to your pants?'
As I closed the door I realized
He had as much luck as I
What a great guy
We will just chill tomorrow
Oh moan I guess I'll just have to borrow
Some deodorant from my sister and
a Shirt from my friend
You can never be sure
What disaster will happen
At least it's not just me
I gotta take an aspirin!
Author notes
Written April 19th, 2006
A contest entry
- Make me Cry by future-unfathomable.
500 points, ended April 27, 2006, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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It's to show how she's rushing to get ready.
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why perfume?...why not a shower?
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Thankyou for your comment and your concern for my cousin, and I did show her your write. She had already decided to tell someone who could help. Thankyou!
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this is just my luck. you wrote this very me write and have truly made me smile. thank you for that. today a smile is so very priceless. vilanger
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AH! Thank you. I loved this! It's funny and very true. ^_^
Thank you for writing something uplifting. I really needed it.
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Halarious
wow...this is funny. I haven't had a date yet, but I'm sure that when I finally get one, this will become my story. I liked this. It didn't have rhythm or rhyme, or anything, but that gave it a sense of hectic-ness. I loved it...great job!!! -
Well I don't get why I'm a poor child but okay
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you poor child you.
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Very funny! I really liked how crazy hectic and nervous you made the person in your peom. It was amusing! I did think that it was sweet that you added in that he had probably the same problems that the girl had! It was so totaly funny i justed LMAO!!!!!
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