If we believe
Hearts are true
Faith and trust
Just me and you
Simple gift
Just hold me tight
For ever and more
Dream she tonight
Hug me close
As you do just right
Dreams are pleasant
And your my light
If we believe
Hearts are true
Love for ever
I need you
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Written April 19th, 2006
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this is so sweet big bro of mine i have taken this poem as an assignment because it is so well i couldnt pass it up. the poem is so true too. well its getting late so id better get going off to bed for i need to rise early in manana. love you bro.
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that is so sweet i love. i will have to add some more poems soon....i love the way it floses all together it ryms so good job tell jenny i miss her and u see u soon love u by....
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i love this poem! pure love is so hard to find and i'm happy that you found your true love...i wish you luck...
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Excellent
This is simple and sweet, delightful and happy. it shows the best part of love, like two peices of a puzzle that are perfect. very nice, and peaceful. -
that was so sweet i loved it....reading your poemds makes me feel your love for jenny.....I knkow you love her broe.....so keep it up and hope you dig up more u can write about her...
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i love this poem...well i love all ur poems but still...it was good...arggg..this is making me miss u even more..than i already do of course...anyways...i love you tons and i wish u were here, my fav sophman....
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Sweet and Good
Very sweet in it's simplicity. This seems to get to the core of your emotion very easily and simply. Ususally I'm not a fan of short and sweet cause it usually feels like something's missing, but this is good. Self contained and wrapped up nicely.
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