to think of you hurts
I need your love tonight
I will be alone
no one knows my pain
you left me with nothing
why are you so low
only time will tell
whether you will come back
please come back to me
Author notes
my first haiku
Written February 27th, 2003
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It looks like girls all around the world long for the same thing- just a little bit of love! Nice poem you have here! I hope there is someone in your life who appreciates your intelligence and emotions!
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its great! while reading this i could feel the sadness, and i love the tint of hope in the last verse, as if you are waiting hoping the person will come back. words of love i guess. well done, keep up the potry!!!!!
**thanks for your comment on my poem**
Sarah
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distant hug
distant hug
this is all I can think to say
to maybe help mend your pain
but keep up the good work
and continue writing
...I'm always reading
Lots of Love~~
~~~mojdeh~~~ -
excellent
Very well done for a "first"!
If you are serious about Haiku...check out Kyews page and J is also really very good at Haiku! Nice work DoubleClick!
~Laura
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