What?
Why did you tell me to do that?
How could I listen to You?
Who?
Listen to me?
Why?
Because I,m you.
Huh?
How can this be?
You can't be me.
Only I can be me.
But I think different.
Yes you are you.
But I am you to.
wether you like it or not.
Why?
Why do you have to be me?
Don't you have another place to go?
Don't think so.
You are my only place to go.
I command your rage.
I command your hate.
But I don't want rage.
I don't want hate.
I only want love.
You are here too much.
I don't care.
You're stuck with hate.
You're stuck with rage.
And you can't put me back in my cage.
Author notes
Written April 19th, 2006
What did you think
Comments
-
Cage
Hi, I really liked this poem and there is a good message here somehow. Don't let anyone put you in a cage. And you will never be someone else. Good job!
-
Goodtimes
I really liked this one it's very nice. Brings in the whole question of self thing. Love-Gaddy
-
nice.....good one.
"What?
Why did you tell me to do that?
How could I listen to You?"
THese were the best lines......l8tr
-
I enjoyed reading this. I was compelled to find out who this mysterious person was. A very creative write. In the 4th stanza 'i am you to' should be 'i am you too' and 'wether' should be 'whether.' I hope this helps. Great job on the write, and thank you for sharing with us.
Adding your comment:
